Black Poetry : Mental Masturbation

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Hi fam...Missed you. :love: Life's been rough for me and I haven't been able to dedicate myself to the fam like I was. I really really miss you guys and I've read some of my old threads and from what I can tell, yall missed me too. Awww. :thanks: :grouphug:

    Now for the poetry.

    Mental Masturbation
    Written: 08-01-2004

    While on my mission to turn dirt into diamonds
    i realized...i didn't know where my mind went!
    i realized that on the way
    i lost my path to inspiration
    lost my motive in motivation
    lost my strength in determination
    and all that i want is some destination
    some definite place to reach to feel ambitious sensation
    and not lose touch with my "rhythm nation"...
    so i sat down one day to touch myself
    in ways that i've never even dared to go
    and i told myself when i come to come solo
    not only solo, but strongly solo
    so i rubbed my inner sensitivity
    making sure that the right amount of pressure was hittin me
    circular strokes i took to rush the blood to the tip
    of my mental dam which had been so strongly built
    i punctured through it to feel my walls of strength slowly gripping my soul
    recognizing the power that my mind withholds
    i stroked every fold and every crevice of me
    in and out, in and out,
    I most certainly and
    insertively inscribed every inch of insidious imagination inside of me
    i chose to hold back and tease myself mentally
    keep myself from climaxing prematurely
    I grabbed Eve's breast of knowledge and all humanity
    and even dared to squeeze the nipple gently
    trying anything to get me off to release this most
    powerful wave of emotion and greatness and
    everything it took out of me i started
    not to breathe i tried to keep
    my sanity but it was so hard this epiphany
    was so strong that it squeezed my mind for
    everything every inch of juice that it had
    because finally it was elated, past glad
    to free itself from that cold, industrious land
    where sometimes we wish that big brother could watch
    and place us in some time filled notch
    where all our days are filled with bleak and bitter promise
    instead of those which we often have to struggle
    having reality and dreams and goals to juggle
    i broke free with the orgasm filled with mental bliss
    i broke free into a creative pleasing abyss
    and when i finally licked my lips....
    i had some pep...in my step...
    some twist...in my hips...
    and most importantly...
    i had my regained every inch of my lost mental freedom.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey welcome back playwititpimp !
    indeed we missed u much ya warm flow and deep
    mental play happy to be reading you again !!!!!!!!
    this took my mind somewhere u know tyte drop
    sistah Queen .....much luv @ ya :love:
     
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    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my glad you find what you were looking for. I so enjoyed this wonderful creative, deep scribe. Do it. Much love



    "I can do all things through Christ, which strenghthens me" Philippians 4:13 :spin:
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Hey $$RICH$$ and poetic_diva,

    Thanks for the love!

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    this was tight
    had me thinking
    glad ya home!!!!
    hope to see you in chat soon.. :wink:
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Hey mzblkangel,

    yes i will be there! thanks for showing me love.

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    Wow...Your writing is so rich and deep with images and emotion....you can almost feel that self assured mental breaking free. This was awesome.
     
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