Black Poetry : Mental Love-Verses

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he challenged my
    love-verses to
    complete him in ways
    that only he could
    imagine....
    then, one night he
    asked me to reverse
    the verses so that
    it would not hit
    him so hard
    i looked into his
    beautiful big browns
    and said, "that is
    like asking me to
    stop loving you."
    he pulled at my
    heart strings
    he said the verses
    made him not want
    to sleep because
    his mental was
    hungry for more
    i found him weeping
    in the middle of
    the night...he said
    that he wanted to
    find something other
    than solitude, so
    he read intently for
    the essence in the
    quality of my verses
    that is where he
    found love
    i held him in my arms,
    kissed his forehead
    and said, "just let
    me be."
    then, i moved him, i
    moved him, i moved him
    into a slow serene
    verse that only i knew
    he could understand
    that is when i learned
    that my mental made
    love to his heart as he
    continued to read me
    so i continued to move
    him to a rhythmic-sleep,
    as i whispered my mental
    love-verses to him softly
    i lost my existence in him
    and once more i
    whispered, "it is because
    of you that these
    love-verses are true."


    ~~~letsbeincrazeelov~~~


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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister...can i get somma dem love verses...i'm going through a little insomniac period and i needs ta sleep. PLEASE...dig deep into your bag of tricks and find me a sleeping pill to relax my will...that i might stop thinking of you.

    that's when you know the river is flowing hard, babygurl. DO WHATCHA DO.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum Lister

    mentals making love to hearts...... loving this like biscuits and syrup....




    One
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeee like u & me ......lovin dis piece of sweet poetic flow
     
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    Lister,
    I'm loving the flow of this...
    love has that effect on you..nice piece.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    my sister... my sister... my sister!! lady of love
    poetry... indeed!! :D i have waited&waited for
    you to hit us off wit somethin' new... & you... as
    usual... NEVA disappoint me!! this is one of
    those "this is the one" kinda peaces... know
    what i mean?? :wink: (i know you do!!) lol

    thank you for sharing... mmm mmm mmm...

    itsallLove, chile!!

    elayne.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller...yes, you may (lol). thank you for reading me. and yes, you are right.

    zorbshun, gah...me, too! i'm glad that you loved it like that!

    shery...you are too much (lol). i'm glad that you read me, dear friend.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich...i'm glad that this piece put the wooo into your weee (lol). thank you.

    epip...poetik queen, thank you for reading me. and yes, it does.

    sweet sunshyne, i feel ya. you always know xactly what to say to make yo sista' ova heyah smile.
     
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    my oh my

    Love is in the air
    and Lister girl you are fanning it all ova da place !!!!

    Lovely read !
    Natasha :heart:
     
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    Lister~

    I needed to see this ma! I feel like the Vibe done shook me, or perhaps I shook it... howeva it be you've still got it, and I needed to read it, see it, feel it, and I did so...

    Thank you
    Reas
     
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