Black Poetry : Mental Intimacy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Oct 17, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I touch you in the heat
    of passion, I love you with
    all my kewl urgency

    As I feel you in the dark of
    night, I close my eyes softly
    to visualize the intimacy you
    reveal just for me; your lover

    I twice inhale deep breaths of
    you to smell of a secret pretty
    that arouses my senses and
    burns within my heart

    My mental flows like it has
    always known your beauty;
    always unconcealed to my
    own intimate thoughts

    I heard you cry for me with
    quiet overtures; wanting me
    to reach to hold you to offer
    the strongest intimate comfort
    that a man in love possesses

    Your personal serenity is
    warmed as I speak the
    sweet somethings that
    mean everything to those
    who overstand our love
    at this, its intimate core

    I have touched you with
    a feeling that no other can
    feel

    I have inhaled your aromatic
    self to enhance my own private
    joy

    I have heard you as I spoke your
    name to profess my ultimate love
    for you; whispering subtleties
    of the love you have for me

    Come now and lay with me
    within our shared mental's
    intimate soul

    (C) GQInc 2001
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    go head GQ

    tight flow so beautiful

    pd
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak to the heart, Q.

    mellow music of love.

    Str8.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    extremely tyght flow of love vibes

    man ya off da hook and in da love mood here
    G.Q do yo thang !!!!:toast: :heart:
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gq-man, your mental intimacy is a beautiful thing. thank you for sharing it with us all.

    ~~~massaginthamind~~~
     
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