Quiet Poetry Lounge : Mental images replaceable

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mentally traped in da prison cell
    confine to the solitude of livin hell
    cage by self on sub wall
    wishing , praying making da call

    Crying through adolescent years
    upon da mass of stilliness fears
    leaving puddles of salty tears
    as i recapture the faded peers

    Oblivious accusations seals fate
    but my mental uplifting never too late
    movin from da cage of my mind
    to a light of radiant shine

    Controling every circumstance
    laid on me by da master plan
    each requirement is heavily pose'd
    as my conscious continue to grow

    Punishment as shade is abundantly
    the outward judgemental and pain
    has been outlasted by my mental brain
    as my mind fully retreat

    Into da depth of unknown
    as my heart sing the freedom song
    where history is reversed
    release by the mental curse

    as life is again defeated by mind
    in new age and slumbering time
    as da walls fall , cage open wide
    freely thinking like a strong tide

    Wov in da web of everlasting
    uninformed as i become an observer
    painting in my mind the picture
    creating da sculptor image

    Da will is in heights beyond
    floating , flyin high
    da mental is free resoundingly
    been replaced .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What this made me think about, was how thoughts of the past can circle around in one's mind, keeping one stagnant. What a release it must be to break free. This piece made me reflect, poet.
     
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    Daily i'm replacing da images of da mind !
    as this return again deeper in da mental.
     
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    returning wit a thankz and mental waves of notion to da maze set forth
     
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