Black Poetry : Mental Bowel Movement #1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Oct 16, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ----come with me to my toilet it's time
    to take a *****---ugggggggggggggh...

    As I sit here pondering resembling
    Rodin's thinking man I wonder when
    Amerikkkas done chasing immorality
    around the globe will it begin to chase
    it's own tail while frothing at the mouth...
    ya see, immorality is a tattoo stamped
    on this country's *** on the left side of the
    crack...see look at the people standing on
    the other side of the tracks...if your blak, have not,
    or down right po' that's you/me/us...and
    "just us" the only kind we really know...
    see...immorality is racial profiling, illegal searches,
    killing unarmed brothers, bombing southern churches,
    invaded privacy, and homelessness, voided history,
    and educational wrecklessnes...and Amerikkka's
    still BEAUTIFUL...Prince said it best "...the beautiful
    ones will hurt you all the time"...I say Amerikkka's
    in need of a facelift...but see Revlon ain't
    gone fix it, M.A.C can't cover it up it's just a face
    dotted in acne...hmmm, maybe WAR wil cover it up
    political cosmetologists try to erase the
    crows feet of the beast that walk the earth looking
    for third world road kill...and when all the weak and feeble
    and trade sanctioned starved people's faces have X's where
    there eyes used to be and the stench is blown back up the deads
    *** by "our country 'tis of thee" where will the
    beast go when it gets hungry again? Dark meat will be
    the preferred fare unless you can pay it...DO NOT PASS
    GO you know who the real MONOpoly is, we just look at it
    from the eyes of the hunted....staring into the
    crosshairs of a scope asking if our hair is in order
    cause we been brainwashed....and Amerikkka is still
    beautiful...see propaganda can recreate an attitude
    of the minds of those that don't question, make an
    old hag look like a beauty queen...and the question
    is Alex, "who are the most devious folks on the earth yet
    one would never be able to tell with all the kissed babies
    and promises of tax breaks"...answer: the USA...


    ...plop! plop!

    I'm done....flush.

    (c)2001 blakverb "MBM"
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak Man Thinkin'

    Dayuuuum Blak ~ well, all I can say is somebody betta call "roto-rooter" cause I think there's something stuck inside the porcelain throne!!

    :lol:

    Go'on witcha' baddddd self!
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss N2URSOUL,

    thank you as usual. Roto rooter can't fix this problem.

    blak
     
  4. MzNappi

    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the best work is usely overlooked....

    i love yr descriptiveness and passion...

    you always motivate me in more ways than i can ever explain, funny thing cause i m working on a piece along these same lines

    "God can t bless America..."
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: man sumptin stink :puke:

    twin you dropped a load here. i hope nobody sleeping :sleep: on this one.

    definitely tight but two rules of thumb for the bathroom:

    1. flush as you go :D
    2. spray as you go :eek:

    no doubt a definite read....
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak, this is truly tyght on tha mental...keep on speakin' on that truth, i'm lovin' it. very well done, dear poet.
     
  7. msluciousb

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    And folks wanna go back to normal, which was never normal in the first place, "For God would not Have you to be ignorant!". Now if we made in his own image
    certainly we posess his every charachteristic, Is this a Holy War, Civil War the Race War?????I think the answer my friend is blowing in the wind>>I smell something! I smell something else!
    I think it is the mans ******** fallin into the minds of the populus!
    Read 4-16-86 Help We Killin Babies >>>>You done me proud,
    my brotha evokin flow where some of this stuff needs to go!
    Can you pass me some paper! I'm out over here>>>>>>>>>>.
     
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    ...."comin' out feelin' about ten pounds lighter."

    propaganda has people mentally constipated...
     
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    repostrepost
     
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