Black Poetry : Men's Ego & Her Ways

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Distant

    Yet close

    Heart hurts

    We're on two separate posts

    You're on "fort your way"

    Me at "Camp ego" to stay

    Differences in opinions

    Force the games we play

    Our first game was

    Me not back down(Ego)

    And You constantly persist

    You know, force your ideas on me

    While I protest its (bullsh*t)

    Engage in a game of chance

    But not given each other a chance

    Like when you ask, were Id been

    And my response was "What No Dinner"

    I forced the conversation to end

    I come in Ego on flame

    Holding an attitude

    Feeling ball and chained

    Leaving you hanging

    Unhappy Lion unable to tame

    And you only wanted to talk.
    EGO

    You with your talking

    Never listening to me

    You, You, you

    And your way

    Skip my ideas and me.

    Only talking you do

    Is to bicker at me

    I need a man......

    Why don't you......

    **** you get on my nerves see.......

    That's all my women ever says to me

    And its suppose to me love

    Understanding, and Us.....Please

    My ego, and You Ways

    Won't allow us to be,

    I'm do both us a favor

    Untie this knot

    It's over for me

    I'll allow you to find that man........

    While Ill perch high upon my ego

    Ill stop ignoring you

    Cause this is as far as we go

    I realized something

    Although I hate that we're thru

    But My Smoke filled ego

    And you wanting your way

    Leaves no room for ME & U



    Lj
     
  2. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    nice flow. I like the concept too, I think super-egos play a huge part in all our actions.
     
  3. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.... it's strange... i was talking about that with a friend of mine... great stuff man!!!!! i love, i love, i love!!!! u know i've always been a fan!!!!

    :hearts3:

    much love, plain.
    (ooh, i think ur b-day's coming up?)
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks alot plain,
    Im looking for you, so we can put it down one mo time.
    Im glad you enjoyed the read!


    Thanks also Onichika,
     
  5. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah we should!!! but.... where??? hhp is a no no!

    well, let me know luvvy!!!
     
  6. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know a sight we could do it on, and then bring it here!
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok let me know!!!
    peace!
     
  8. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Since I cant send you an email thru here, do you have an email account
    I dont wont to put the site up there, and people think Im trying to pub it up, cause Im not. I just know its somewhere that we can collabo on.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got the poetic juices flowing with this piece.
    thanx for sharing.
     
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