Black Poetry : Men Of Men

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Many tymes before me
    was a man yet proud
    but hate in his heart

    living large not being smart
    call him some super king
    from the things he do
    false love and foolish acts

    lady man was he
    flashing his gems
    calling kim in front of joanna
    at the door was a few more
    was he some male whore!:eek:

    thinking of self comtemped play
    having **** his way.......no no :nono:

    and before me was freestyle lover man
    making plains to be right
    yet he fuss and fight
    pay no bills just sit round wit his heels up
    what da *****!
    men of men not real
    just born to be wild dumb and very foolish

    many tymes before me
    we knew of men
    yet not felt the emotion of men
    til now
    and today men r men
    yet some still like to play
    in the fields of heated rapture
    some like to lie and make a soul cry
    some is wack
    but some is love , compassionate
    some is real

    we have a few good men left!!:toast:

    just glad i was molded into a man of love:heart:
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You wrote em' right. But I believe the last verse describes you...

    but some is love , compassionate
    some is real .

    You be right, there are some good men. Pray that the good women are found by the good men, in a world where so many are gaming.
     
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    Rich,

    You're right baby, there are some
    some good men left.
    :eek:
     
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    RICH

    This is one of the best pieces you've ever written

    man i liked this it was deep man

    one of your best

    DSSNY
     
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    JOYCE

    U FOUND ME IN THIS PIECE AT THE END !
    THERE STILL A FEW OF US LEFT OUT HERE...THANKZ SIS...:D
     
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    SEXE1

    U KNOW US GUYS BE LIKE DAT BUT
    IT'S STILL A FEW OF US LEFT ALL GOOD
    THANKZ SIS..........;)
     
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    SO'JA DA STREET FIGHTER

    I GOT SOME STUFF IN MY BELT YA KNOW
    GLAD U LIKE IT MAN!!!
    JUST DOING MY BEST AT WHAT I DO......:D
     
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    TO DA ~ Chick

    of love off da wings of my two white doves
    some of us out here is real
    we care and have emotional compassionate
    love in our hearts ..............these things i offer:heart: :kiss:
     
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    And the brother $$RICH$$ has spoken!!! This is real my man...and brother I echo you in the fact that I am also glad I was molded into a man of love.

    you put it down with this one!!!! keep it flowing.

    blak
     
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    VERB

    U KNOW WE BE JUST A FEW OF DA GOOD ONE'S
    SO MANY YET HAVEN'T FOUND SELF TO BE WHAT
    THEY SHOULD BE ...........A MAN ..............REALITY!!
    RUMBLING HERE..