Black Poetry : MEMORY LOST ME

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MEMORY LOST ME

    My ex came over to talk just as a friend
    We ended up doing the vertical bend
    I guess he just started looking good again
    My body erects for him
    But my heart belongs to my new man

    My conscious teases me
    The hands of another man pleases me
    My new man sees me
    He can smell the sexual exhales that I breathe
    My vaginal walls hesitate to compel;
    They swell not so well when he’s inside of me

    He says look into my eyes
    Tell me that you love me
    Possession took over
    Hypnotic hangover
    Just as I arrived, I looked into his eyes and ….
    Screamed out my ex’s name

    DAM**!!!
     
  2. mz_phi1

    mz_phi1 Member MEMBER

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    ****

    Yes **** is the exact word......be careful girl
     
  3. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mz girl trust it's make beleive!:picture:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once again a wonderful flow, flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa!
    see what can make u lost
    this was tyte !
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the way you captured the "torn between" feeling.
    Wonderfully written!
    Good Job
    VERY GOOD JOB!

    Peace and love
    twision
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dang...u aint the first
    mos def won't be the last...
    good prose...i like how it got to the point fast...

    one love
    khasm
     
  8. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you poets:sand:
    I appreciate the love most definitely!
     
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