Black Poetry : Memories

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Memories is what we have
    Things that happend far off in the past
    You call only for some sweet conversation
    But I have another meal to bring to the table
    "The proclamation for an explanation"
    When she's urkin' your nerves and makin' you shout
    You seek me to find a way out
    I was being stupid when I let you fool me
    Then I learned betta' from my cousin who schooled me
    The love your girl gives to you is being taken for granted
    Because you are still a little boy who can't handle it
    When you here Sean Paul and Sasha sing,"I'm Still In Love With You"
    A picture of me and the sound of my laugh gets you confused
    You ask,"is there still feelings for me in your heart?"
    I reply,"No boo that's why we are apart."
    I refuse to be a stumbling block to a youngin' who don't know a thang
    She loves you and I won't cause meaningless pain
    So memories is all you'll have
    Memories,"Please forget about the past."
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    something in the past we all should pass through our memories
    for the peace we seek within.......nice well express flow
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    memories....
    very nicely posed
    flow on..likes
     
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    Some memories are good, others we can learn from, keep flowing poet of the week.
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: everybody I just had to write it:wink:
     
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    oh yeah...those bittersweet memories...at lease for me. this hit me in a spot that I chose to forget...yet kept.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope it didn't hit too hard
    thanks for checking it out
    :wink:
     
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