Black Poetry : MEMORIES of a time.. long Gone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 17, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What do you do if you’re the operator?

    Patient on the table.
    Administer the anesthetic.
    You know the dose.

    Just enough to put the man at ease.

    Can you feel it?

    Cutting deep into the real you.
    Taken away are moments in time.
    Falling back into the memories of your self.
    Flipping over and over inside, as you have no concept of time.

    Foggy memories.

    I don’t want to forget.

    Good times, bad times thoughts of you.

    Fragmented.

    Falling into cloud nine.

    What a ride.
     
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    my goodness wow
    that would be some kind
    of ride
    indeed
    nice drop
    Peace
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Blue.

    Your always there. Keeping it real. Wishing you the best this Holiday Season. :luvv:
     
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    wow! HODEE, I am lovin this concept. hell, I love this piece. flow on, brotha, flow on
     
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