Black Poetry : Memories gone bad

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  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why do you keep taunting me?
    Mind set ablaze with memories of an eternity of happiness
    Heart bleeding from a ***** of a thorn... from a rose oh so beautiful
    Blood oozing, so red its scarlet! Almost sickening.
    Butterflies in my stomach turned to stabbing pains.
    Knowing that the sweet memories will never again be
    But I tell myself.
    There will be better...
    Tomorrow is here ... and gone
    still
    noone
    still
    all alone
    You say,
    Why is it your worry?... let it be...
    But i cant let it be.
    The memories
    taunt me
    haunt me
    still...
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes memories are just not nice....
    Lovin' this piece:wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    memories not always beautiful or sweet memory
    well felt
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those memories do tease us sometimes, and it is painful, you expressed this well here. New memories can replace some of the old.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sad when memories
    turn for the worst
    your captured the
    process so vividly
    nice scribe
     
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