Black Poetry : Memoirs of a Victim

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  1. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I lay in my bed staring at
    the walls of what used to
    be my house, wondering
    if I have the strength to
    reclaim what it is that you
    took from me. Once fancy free
    I hardly get out of bed to
    release myself...all because
    you had to be greedy.
    Couldn't wait for your piece
    of the pie, so you stole from
    the plate of all men past,
    present, and future. Once
    daddy's little girl, now
    violated with the stench
    of whore...or al least that
    is what I feel like. Maybe
    I should not have been so
    nice or said hello...just
    the mere thought makes
    me want to cut out my tongue
    anything to have avoided
    the pain that you have inflicted.
    My face will forever hold the scars,
    as my ears will forever hear the
    screams...
    my screams...
    my pain....
    my life forever changed....I am a victim
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope that I didn't offend anyone with this piece.
     
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    offend anyone ????!!!!!

    my dear Sister ...
    those who read this peace
    can only be blessed

    thank you for sharing

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    these are depths

    into which most are afraid to go. Thank you for sharing this bitter slice of reality.

    awesome piece

    a
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sexe1

    a victim you say
    but when you pened
    this you declared your
    "FREEDOM"
    said you will be a victim
    no more....

    Sis you have not offend but opened. I am happy that you had the courage to share you. Looking foward to growing witcha.



    One
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    victimize none pleasure

    sad yet real
    mixed emotions flowin'
    u speak ya freedom of trap
    bedded fears of a victim
     
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    Beautifully written, revealing the sins of evil fathers. Daddy's are suppose to protect their little girls. This poem let's the reading step in and look from the "inside" at the aftermath of sexual abuse. Don't worry if you have offended anyone. Poetry should always be thought provoking and this poem certainly is.

    Keep flowing Sexe1.
     
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    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this reminds me

    of the scar tissues of my own past ~ but I was plucked out of the sesspool, washed clean, and covered in unconditional love.

    Thank you for sharing.

    SWT
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for taking time
    to enter my world...
    Destee, alyce, Ubzorbsnun,
    Rich, Joyce, ShadeeLadee....
    Thanks for your words and
    comments, they are appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as u r my sweet

    The continue blessing is within reach !!
    just touch someone .......thats what u do round here
    touch us poeticly.....thank u for sharing a piece of u :cool:
     
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