Black Poetry : memoirs of a love story

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  1. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    I can't remember what I did last week
    But I can remember,
    The smile of a beautiful kindergarten girl
    As she passed my way.
    She was you
    You whom I can't say I was meant to be with.
    Yet I am willing to admit that I dreamed of you
    Before I ever dreamed of love,
    Sitting at the foot of my bed
    Whispering words lost to time.
    And as time passes
    Reality catches up with these memories
    And a kiss labels you my first love
    And my first love becomes my teacher,
    And I hers.
    Eagerly we learn eachothers lessons
    Committing them to memory.
    Then together we make memories
    You trying to teach me how to sing
    I attempting to expand your horizions
    The first time we made love
    Which was honestly making love,
    erasing the line between sex and love
    To make all things one,
    At least for the moment.
    Then the moment passes
    And I have to collect my memories
    Build a place in my heart
    For you, apart from all others.
    But now. I have a new love,
    And I can't hold on to you anymore,
    And I can't dismiss what we had.
    So I make one more memory;
    The day I gave you the part of my heart
    That was always yours,
    And pray that you never forget
    THAT I LOVE YOU..
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so sweet...
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eternal,

    It all starts off very innocent and turns into something very lovely.

    Nice one.

    Jen
     
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    eternalprince
    This is very nice..
     
  6. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EternalPrince

    Aww...I will respond to this later...Don't have time but I love the way you painted this picture for my..puppy love to a more mature, almost real "thing"
    I love you too!!!
    Eternal
     
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