Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 21, 2001.
we reached the cumplete climax
yet i feel you
oh YEAH! Been thea!
does anybody know the story of David and Bathsheba??
yeah, i just recently read it on the net
how is this relative to your haiku
for those who are not familiar with the story
So few words........yet such a wealth of meaning.
thanx to all who read and felt this piece.
a spiritual and understanding relationship is the climax..
pd, (the dunness)
no, this is not relative at all. just an inspiration for my next piece.
thanx for the website for the fam to see if they have not already read it in the bible....
nfinite dunn 2 his dunness,
I'm so glad pd gave me the opportunity to read the story, because from your comment I also thought you meant there was a relevance between that and the haiku....
and if that be the case...then David should have just stopped at lookin....before the climax of the story....
I'm hopin I have this right when I say there is no deeper love than that of two people who connect on all levels...
love always flow sweet
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