Black Poetry : Melting the Rainbow

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Accents of
    a moving sphere
    are adorned with
    multiple splashes
    of brilliant colors
    and as the
    sun-beams gleam
    the rays are
    falling
    down on
    watery clouds with
    trickling showers
    caught by clustered dew-drops

    Of these are
    colors changing
    from a
    splendid rose
    to the pale violet's
    dejected hue

    In various lines
    to the gazer's eye
    the rainbow melts
    and assumes
    a different lustre




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AWEEEE!! TOOOSWEET!

    MELTING IN YA WORDZ OF ESSENCE..:)
     
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    I am through with you...N2...I am now standing in the background hiding behind your shadows. Fo' real!
    One more poetic masterpiece to add to the collection.

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    ¡Ahh, que linda! (oh how pretty!)

    What a beautiful rainbow
    your flow just painted
    with pretty broad strokes
    on the canvas of my mind!
     
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    when i read

    stuff like this
    it shows me
    why i love your work
    so much

    DSSNY
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Inside You, my sweet, is where "LOVE" can be found!

    Thank you for your continuous support of my work!


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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rykah~

    Good to see how this prose came through & captivated your mental provoking deeper thoughts from within!
    I often wonder how deep my scribes may hit home
    for some readers... and from your response, it let's me
    know that my piece took you to the brink of thought
    and pulled these pictures out of your cerebral....

    Thank you for your response!


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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    You're not through -- not until I say so! :lol: :wink: (gotcha')

    You darling, are definitely NOT standing in the rear of my words ... to me you are at the forefront of my thoughts, and I am glad to say you're a personal friend-o-mine!!


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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NPG

    Hey gurl, I'm glad you could see the vivid colors through soul's
    my imag-eye-nation!

    Thanks for the read!


    One.
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DSSNY

    I couldn't have asked for such
    a kinder response! You know
    how to get N2
    the very core of my
    being with your responses,
    and I do sincerely THANK YOU!

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