Black Poetry : Meltdown(vdr)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Feb 4, 2003.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have the ability
    to simply melt me
    like ice-cream on a hot day~
    it's like I'm trying to stay cool
    trying not to come across
    as some lovesick fool
    but the heat
    radiating from your body
    gravitating toward mine
    sends my senses
    into over-over-drive~
    I'm trying to keep
    my composure
    but it's not easy
    when your eyes
    are all over my body
    teasing me~
    you know how to move me
    control me own me
    without even touching me~
    you know how to bring me
    to my knees
    and it's heavenly~
    and the anticipation
    is slowly killing me
    because I know you know
    you've got me
    so do what you
    want with me
    but please do it quickly~
    before this need in me
    makes me go crazy
    and causes me to act
    uncontrollably and I
    melt
    d
    o
    w
    n
    all over you

    (c) nfn 2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl!!! dat kinda meltdown is like hot carmel ova ice cream

    moving fast as i can ! LOL

    i really love dis one
     
  3. Bishop

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    got me licking my lips ova here......wooooweeee!!!
     
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    Oooo Kitana,

    This here joynt is seriously :flame:!!!

    Keep up the sensual work... :wink:

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Tight piece Kitana... dayum tight!


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    sssslllluuuuurp!!! this was a nice nice piece queen. got a brother thinkin' 'bout writing something. Meltdown...

    blak
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is so good to see all the replies the men have been givin' the ladies..you are all so sweet and so supportive....

    Coco...where on earth have you been..been missin' you gurl!!!

    K
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On the contrary Elmo...that is exactly the kind of response I would expect to get from you....:) both of them!!!
    thank you for taking the time to read my words while going on your merry little way trying to understand the beauty and diversity of poetry....

    K
     
  9. elayne.

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    kt.


    (clearing my throat)

    well... umm... my ****!! :lol:
    the title should have given it away...
    though i really wasn't expecting you to
    go "there"... but you sho' did... & it was
    classic KT wit a whole lotta spice!! & i
    love-did it, chile!!! (with 3 !!!) :D

    itsallLove,
    elayne.