Quiet Poetry Lounge : melancholy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Aug 9, 2013.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    morning
    comes littered with
    cold rain, the sky barely
    able to remember the feel
    of its own stars, gray clouds
    masking where they
    once shone
     
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    The sun of you
    a sky of blue
    so perfectly
    you reign
     
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    That TotalView will have you reviewing
    How she wrote what she wrote
    Again
    And
    Again
    Simply to get it right
    Where it needs to be held
    Close at heart
    For Now and every Bright Day that comes
    Over the darkness cradeling
    What is inevitably ready to come
    Today!
    Stars will come back regarlessly to say!
    Getting you to that Lighted
    TotalView of Life being Lived.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well stated love the inner view
     
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    the philosopher rises. got me watching the morning skies...seeking cloud-covered stars that speak to me.
     
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