Black Poetry : Meet Me There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweet apple*pie, Jan 3, 2009.

  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Life has great Meaning

    Great Meaning I want to share with you

    Will you

    Chase butterflies with Me

    Through the winding hills

    Of this thing called

    Life

    Where troubles may drown us

    In the deep valleys of despair, I hold out my hand to you

    To meet me

    On the level plains of our love

    Where roses stand in full bloom

    To meet us

    there
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a lovely sentiment expressed in these lines poetess.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Apple...

    I love the way this ending... beautiful!



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    um

    i'm speechless

    i can't find the words

    this is realer than real

    :hearthis:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful write surely one will meet u there....
     
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    This was a sort and sweet poem
    I like that.

    You needed and took few words to release the withholding.
    Flow on
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so kindly.
     
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    I envision your hand extended out.. asking softly sweet

    This flow is awesome..
     
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    Poetry in its Finest form!
    Beautiful writing my good poetess!
    Loving the flo that flows from
    this pen.
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much, Hodee and Rashad.
     
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