Black Poetry : Measure me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Mar 17, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my prayers are rare windows to my soul
    life lessons
    learned and returned
    the truth burns cause my ears hear
    facts exact
    more direction than text in books
    leaving my whole world shook
    and i'm left within
    on the brink again
    my mind simmerin
    so many bruises to attend
    Playa, reminds me of the lines
    written behind Isaiah
    i find insight in between the nets
    secrets
    go back to the lab and search for
    the works to secure the earth

    i'm a reada
    kinda like a bookworm
    but this might make yo soul squirm
    i feel yo input without words
    emotions you reflect
    my physical ditects
    something, me, i try to laugh at
    still the real gets some get back
    the same cat that sit back
    where you take a bath at
    explores corridors
    written with the devil's seal on it
    forbidden
    all truth smitten
    cause evil develop in men
    hunger to eat again
    like a trend pullin in
    unsuspecting victims like traps too fly
    to live by
    so I n i
    stroll on this mystical journey
    nothing to glorify
    can't take to certain states
    cause i need an attorney?
    clue me in
    black men and cops ain't friends
    jumped on my ***
    and it begins again
    the fight without within
    in shadows of doubt
    i meditate
    on awkward dates i work harder
    and watch stress evaporate
    yearnin for Jah's daughter
    i feel something icy take me
    and penetrate
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed
    likes the vibe of this
    flow on...as i read
    nice drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. Khasm13

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    liked da cadance of this piece
    tight joint son...keep dropin dem
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, the rhythm is on, this would sound wonderful read in voice chat....
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeed my brotha....now.....WHEN did you say you could come into chat and read this LIVE for us? :look: :)
     
  6. PositiveMindset

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    No doubt I'm feelin U.

    Do your thing , bruh.
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one love

    yo thanks e'rybody for checkin my joint out...

    Peace Angel...

    One love Khas(m13)--word, i been feelin kinda stuck...dealin wit a lot of spiritual inflection glad i could move my fingas on da beat--one

    Word, i feel that Watz(inaname)...i'll put this down as numba 2 to spit on voice chat. Thanks 4 da love.. 1

    Triniti(424)--- yo! :D yun, i ain't forgot! lol I just get to use this computer at school in the mornin, and my classmate that has a mic ain't looked out yet. Definitely ain't fo'gotchoo though. I cain't wait till i can drop.... :rolling:

    Positive Mindset - yo name up here sayin you came thru to peep means a lot. one

    OnElove,
    /antar
     
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