Black Poetry : Meaningful Poem

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is this thing we tend to call love?
    A mishap in my case but just an excuse to fall for you
    And with the idea that we’d one day mend our souls and
    Without lending a hand my moon would cast its shadow over you
    Letting the fortune of beauty be your light

    Maybe I am confused
    But many continue to misuse “love”
    And I will not be one to continue the cycle
    I will break the chain before it even begins
    With just a simple touch from the tip of my pen
    With my mind and not my heart,
    Love resides in the mind that keeps it
    Holds it, stores it, raps it…. sings it, writes it, feels it, reads it…those who live it
    I live to be heard
    I live to live a day with no [email protected] tears
    Far from confusion more of diffusion
    With words, pens and verbs
    Told this man, “kiss my ***” cause I could give a fucl< about him
    Never realizing that I did
    And when you think about it
    Poets care the most and are loved the least
    Hence we have the angry, mean poet... writing tired *** love letters
    To a love they will never establish as their own
    Yet I am still the one singing their love song…
    Still I say, poets care the most and are loved the least
    Well this be peace mending together
    For my mother and my father
    This be peace mending together
    For my sister and brother
    This be peace mending together
    For the confused poet and the enlightened poet
    This be peace mending together
    For the blind and for the seen
    This be peace mending together for
    That boy who never noticed me and for the guy I never noticed
    This be peace mending together for
    Revelation and beginning
    This be a PIECE of paper
    This be a poem
    With no meaning
    Just meaningful
    With a caption saying, “Meaning Peace”

    ---Mzpoetic
     
  2. DivaWithTude

    DivaWithTude Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that was good.
     
  3. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks.... :)
     
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    Dang Dam Darn
    Haha this was hot
    Go head poet
    I love this I read twice
    Hot piece poet
     
  5. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks....i am glad that u enjoyed it
     
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    Excellent.....

    That was one of the realest.....I enjoyed that one
     
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    I agree .
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful piece!
    I related to this from the heart!
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks u guys for the love on this poem! it's always a pleasure when someone is able to relate to your work :)
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It always is.
     
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