Black Poetry : Meaning?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Feb 14, 2005.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I had you it mattered
    I mean everything seemed to be a little more important
    Days were not just days, they were breathes of life
    Nights were more than life, cause I had you!

    Now we are divided like raindrops on the pavement
    Loves evaporated into society
    Life has turned frigid without meaning
    And I only have me!

    Dreams erased, hoped shattered
    Everyone’s standing up for love
    When Im forced to be saddled!
    Stuck in loves emotional battle!
    Reminding me of my lost!

    Distant, cause alone
    No familiar face or feelings
    Solitude as my friend
    Happiness is a distant memory!

    Now like a dictionary with no words
    Life’s lost loves meaning
    Me without you is still an equation
    Only it doesn’t amount to happy.

    Me without you,
    Amounts to nothing concrete
    Life’s unsures
    Illnesses that remain illnesses
    When missing loves cure

    See this life has no meaning to me
    Now without you
    No red roses
    No candies
    No love from you to me
    Simply love from me
    Emphasizing you as
    My meaning!

    Unfin.
    Lj
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May your life have meaning this Valentine's Day!
     
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    nice work enjoyed the flow thanks for sharing part of you with us.....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    new meanings will rise may the blessing be of u and bring a smile
    tyte drop well felt deeply
     
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    Always hurts to be alone when you thought you would be with that one, but you will find happiness within self. Love will smile on you yet again. I hear what you're saying. Flow on.
     
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    When love dies, the heart gets weak ...just to get stronger, hang in there, it gets better with time.
     
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    Yup definitely travelled down this path...probably still travellin....so this was well felt. Good write!
     
  8. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :injured: Thnks fam for hearing my V DAY VENT!
     
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    it was a tyte one too , most welcome THEONE
    keep flowing
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.....this was just gr8!

    oh by the way...hello stranger...lol really Nice floE
     
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