Black Poetry : Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Nov 13, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    High maintenance
    That’s what I am
    A complicated
    Got a lot of **** with me
    Kind of man

    Intelligent and creative
    Head, hard like a rock
    Observant and opinionated
    A thought process that never stops

    Sensitive and moody
    Texture of my skin hard and soft
    Kind and understanding
    Yet capable of going off

    A sucker in more ways than one
    Mostly serious
    But always having fun

    To most of life
    I’ve been a witness
    Love going past the limit
    When I’m handlin’ my business

    Love nature
    Love the city
    Love to be clean
    Love to be gritty

    I never give up
    My tasks get done
    Some way some how
    That’s the short version
    How ya like me now?

    BE
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welll

    life would never be boring....

    and at least you're up front with who you are...so whats wrong with that...nuthin'

    nice piece BE

    K
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to say

    this is a most intriguing self-portrait....and I must agree with Kitana Kitana.... life couldn't possibly be boring and ain't nuffin wrong with tellin it like it tis.....

    show us what you workin wit, BE! :)

    a
     
  4. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    I'd say a brotha got some deep **** wit'im.

    Handle ya bidniz, BE! lol

    J
     
  5. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!

    Twins separated at birth? Kind of the way I felt reading this joint. Spooky.

    Thanks

    BRB
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now who

    would want to be around some old fuddy duddy???? I like ya the way you are. I like the you described above don't chang a dayum thang!




    ME