Black Poetry : me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by bahati, Nov 10, 2003.

  1. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    i'm running
    a chase
    purple haze
    left without space
    trying to find my way
    through this maze
    so many alleys
    don't know which to take
    am about to break
    numb - still it aches
    don't want to stay awake
    among people so fake
    trembling in a quake
    my lament i sing
    weeping
    for relief it shall bring
    relief but when?
    all these tears and blood
    in my pen
    no longer I can
    be living in this situation
    surrounded by me
    and me and me alone
    I wish 99% of these me's were gone
    better yesterday
    than now...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emotional felt within..
    nicely posed...
    good luck
     
  3. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this. It's very heart felt, and I'm fellin it too.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice like a song in my ear
    flow on !