Black Poetry : Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by omoboladapoet, Aug 4, 2003.

  1. omoboladapoet

    omoboladapoet Member MEMBER

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    Naturally me
    from head to toe
    from face to feet
    naturally me
    from my breast to my knee
    from my head to my neck
    skin always clear and in check
    soft and smooth
    No makeup i prefer to keep it nude
    naturally me
    i can`t be what i don`t see
    i see beauty which lives in me
    i inhale it and exhale it
    these being`s with their negative energy are devils
    hating the beautiful so they live life as rebels
    the mirror is my friend
    and in a friend u confide
    my friend helps me admire the divineness in me
    my eyes which glow like lights in the night
    my hair soft and real nice to feel
    my pink lips so full
    this is naturally me
    i love me.............. place no one above me but God
    mentally and physically i show that ability which logically explains
    why and where this self esteem was made
    it runs through my veins enters my brain and is thrown out into this world everyday
    what more can i say?
    i`m no plain jane, i`m no dime piece
    i`m naturally me
    and what i love
    is what i see
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful. Your inner light shown through in every last line. Can't wait to read more of you.

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i see
    thee openly
    yes a true light shine
    upon da Queen B
    yes i see thee
    ummmmm!!! love this here
    u made my heart jump a beat
    dis was sweet .......flowhead on sistah gurl !!!!

    windy~city~styleeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good for you Omo, you have an unwavering inner strength
    you need that to survive in this world. A world that prides
    itself in defining what true beauty is...when it is not at all what
    you see.

    Nice piece,
    Angelic