Black Poetry : Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Apr 26, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the shy sarcastic gurl,
    the one who wears her "i dont care" attitude on her sleeve,
    the one mad guys approach n she give them the "oh please..." look,
    the gurl everybody thinks they know, but dont know ****.
    the gurl who's raised herself n never depended on ne1,
    the gurl they call crazy, but have mad fun around,
    the gurl who swore she would never fall in love, n look @ her now,
    the gurl who was a playa chic, wanted love,
    but didnt want to commit.
    the gurl they called a *****, only b/c she wouldnt stoop to their level.
    the pretty gurl who thinks she's average,
    but knows she got a fat ***.
    the quiet gurl, who stays 2 herself, always in deep thought.
    the one who knows what she wants, but doesnt have the slightest idea of how 2 get it.
    the gurl who's stuck b/c her surroundings lack common sense.
    that gurl who chills in the background, not wantin 2 b noticed.
    the gurl who wish she had more guts 2 voice the only talent she got.
    ****.........forget that gurl
    this is all me!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a nice look inside ya soul
    as i watch it unfold and be told
    in big bold flow
    keep dropin' da flava u scribe
     
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    can't be explained,
    only mainted.
    feelin what you said,
    as your words i read.
    keep on flowin,
    yo heart is showin.
    hide not yo face,
    in the places you hate.
    because you make the world go round,
    by a single sound.
    if you keep your eyes closed,
    you will never experience the beauty of a rose.
    i must say i like your style,
    not being afraid to act buck wild.
    i'd like u as a buddy or a friend,
    e-mail me---that's it--the end........(TYTE FLOW GUL)
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww thanx lilcherry76, truly feelin ur words........much love :) .........hit me up on aol Cutegrl27
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww that was sweet lil cheery newayz gurlllllll let me give you yo props on dis one right herre that was good it kinda remind me of me i think you are a tru poet if i must say keep flowin sweetie cuz i luv yo work :):):)
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww, thanx serenti...........much love n u keep writin n ill keep readin..........:)
     
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    That was heart felt and sad. It reminds me of my daughter.
    Know matter how beautiful I tell her she is. she dont believe it. Lot of guys holla at her too, But she pays them know mind. It makes me sad to know you feel this way too. Brought tears to my eyes. I hope one day you know your true worth and the same for her.
     
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    aww, thanx purplemoons........not the "oh please" look as in guys shouldnt approach me b/c i feel that im not pretty or cute........the "oh please" look as in y do they have to approach me in that certain way........"yo shorty, psssss".........much love :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol surry had to laff @ yo shory psssssss serenti gets that alot lol much luv back sarcasm