Black Poetry : Me & You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by inquisitivemind, Feb 20, 2008.

  1. inquisitivemind

    inquisitivemind Member MEMBER

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    From the crown of your head to the soul of your feet I wish I could possess an authorative power. Enabling you to submit to every level of your desires.

    I want to start with your mind to satisfy your intellect. Then I want to converse with you gravitating towards intimacy. You know the enjoyment that I receive from looking into eyes that are starring right back at mine.

    To see the level of appreciation that's written all over your face because I took just enough time to make sure that I look good, and that I smell good, and ultimately that I taste good.

    Standing in the kitchen I want to be able to shake and bake a phalethra of meals that will do more than stick to your ribs. Enabling you to say to a sistha that ain't me. Forgive me lil lady but my baby doesn't want me to eat from another table. For I must confess she's serving only the best that she so willing gives making sure the first time it was done with all the right percission and skills.

    Standing in the living rom or family room I want to be your mid evening entertainment. Spread out like the 60 inch big screen tv with my breast for you to carress and hold like your football. Proceeded by an *** turned up ready for you to spank before after or during a slam dunk.

    As you thrist for me I want to be your mixed drink sitting on the bar in some pink panties. As you give back to me some long island iced teas as I fantasize about sex on the beach. As we both say screw the driver in the car behind us because you're trying to enjoy a blowjob and I'm **** near speechless from screaming orgasms.

    In the bedroom I want your hand over my mouth so the kids can't hear me scream and moan from our erotic passion zone that's rendering ultimate satisfaction. So much so that you know my mind and my thoughts are constantly of you that it cums oozing out of my ears.

    And that's all before we scoot out of the bed onto the floor, and in a chair, and bent over the desk, and me on my knees, and you on your knees. As our now endrenched bodies head to the shower to wash off the sticky-ickies.

    Only to begin our lovemaking all over again before we even reach the early morning dawn. When I wake up smiling from the comfort of you spooned in the right position to serve it up just one more time before you head to work to get on your grind.

    And while I'm at my 9-5 I sit still in my chair trying not to touch myself. Because I want my hand to be right where yours was. But imagery just won't do. Because I need to experience the chemistry that ignites from the oneness called me and you.

    Inquisitive Mind @ 2007 Copyrights
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that's eroticism

    Hello Inquisitivemind,

    WELCOME to DESTEE, we hope that you will make this your home.

    I thoroughly enjoyed "ME & YOU" and look forward to reading more of YOU. :)
     
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    Now that was a complete step into passion, taking care of your mate from A to Z. I was wondering, is this a narrative poem, or a short story?
    Welcome to Destee.com. Please familiarize yourself with our Forum Rules, and our rules of Poetic Etiquette. At the top of this forum, you'll find games and scenarios to participate in as well. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
     
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    :hi: inquisitivemind
    Welcome to Destee!
    Wow wonderful! This flow is
    So romantic, I enjoy how
    Each stanza is an invitation
    To take one to another entrance
    The mind the eyes then farther.
    Wonderful vision you have. Making me smile
    Because it is like I can see you
    Standing there looking at
    The one who has your heart
    You're feeding these thoughts to them
    Much love. Very awesome flow
    Which I will read. Over and over again.
    Oh Yes. Looking forward to reading you more
    And once again.

    Welcome ! Welcome! Welcome!

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    total package here flow head on
     
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    inquisitivemind Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the warm welcome!
     
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    inquisitivemind Member MEMBER

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    I receive your warm welcome in the manner to which it was given.
     
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    Thanks so much!
     
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    Loved when you said, "for you to carress and hold like your football" That was cute! I had to chuckle a few times. Very clever inquisit and welcome to destee. Thanks for tha piece.

    This is beautiful!
    Much Love,
    Desert Storm