Black Poetry : Me versus Her (A song from a ghetto sista)

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She won't ever be me,
    she won't feel like me,
    she won't ever love like me,
    she won't ever be me.......

    She don't understand,
    that you have a certain plan....
    She can't break ur back in,
    b/c she doen't know about what
    you like in the end...
    She doesn't do the same thing I do,
    because not everyone knows you....

    She won't ever be me,
    she won't feel like me,
    she won't ever love like me,
    she won't ever be me.....

    She can't hold it down,
    b/c true love hasn't been found...
    She doesn't hold her own,
    always got her girls on the phone..
    She isn't me,
    b/c I let you be free....

    She won't ever be me,
    she won't feel like me,
    she won't ever love like me,
    she won't ever be me........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed she can't be thee
    only one of a kind of u
    tyte scribe sistah .....wow !!!
     
  3. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich..... Always there givin me the support I need....
     
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    indeed she cant be you
    love the flow....nice.:angel1:
     
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    the hand who understand
    the ear here to listen
    the love of hope .........most welcome sistah
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich and mzblkangel........ :thanks:
     
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    I'm truly feelin this cause its something I can relate to. That was tyte
     
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    This is very nice. It speaks truth in relationships. Some one who understands. Everyone can't know this man. Be let in on the plan. Cause they aren't like you.
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: mochablaze and HODEE
     
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    Re: TO Da1whoownslife

    This is a good poem from you
    Please keep writing and thank you!
     
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