Quiet Poetry Lounge : mE tImE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, May 24, 2009.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The stormy seas rumbled

    Raging waters gave forth anger and madness
    As sadness washed over me

    I calmed the sea

    I walked to the water’s edge
    ‘til dread left me
    …allowing me to see a better place
    A better way of loving me

    I HUGGED ME

    Embracing myself
    In the warmth of my LOVE

    I held me

    Closely.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.......this was delightful of oneself to self that embrace the beings ...Love the flow of it bruh !!!
     
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    I'm loving the ease and the vibe of your "Me Time."
     
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    a necessary tool...

    ...in maintaining ones sanity. nothing wrong with loving oneself. THANKS for reading.
     
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    mE tImE...

    is necessary to have a better time and what better time than taking in some ives.
    Rather the journey you take us on is short or long its always enjoyed. Thank you.


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we live...

    ...for the luxury of loving ourselves...that we might better love someone else. MY THANKS TO YOU, for reading.
     
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    Yes. This reminds me of something I wrote alled my time. We first need to love and embrace ourselves..because sometimes on this earth we are all we have...and GOD is there.

    Flow on...I do not know if I can get of this...you are trying to get some revelation in here!!! lol
     
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    Sometimes, the only solace you have is of your own making.
    Being comfortable with you is the first experience in real love.

    Nicely done, poet.


    epiphany:heart: