Black Poetry : Me my heart and the music

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Jazz4u, Aug 29, 2003.

  1. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Barely visible like a beat through tha chest
    It is like
    Welcome back to thinking- I put it on hold for awhile
    While all I was thinking was everything you until
    Sparks started flying filling in the answers to the questions of
    Wait
    Why
    Am
    I
    Still
    Here- {{{{break}}}}
    -I am a music junkie now sitting listening to the tracks of before my time
    Adjusting to the awakening
    Like
    Oh ****!
    I understand what he meant
    It has symptoms of being hurt
    Tears begin flowing
    Exhaling
    My heart
    Closing my eyes now, stereo blasting at the side of my dome
    Vibrating the thoughts that ricochet in my skull
    Testing the depths of my soul to see if even the deepest alleys can still be seen on high beam
    Activating the reactor of my being while releasing memories that have captivated me
    Like the scent of you left on the pillow
    Disregarding the reasons that brought me back to me
    The pause button has been released
    I’m ready for the play without you now
    Feeling like hallelujah
    I cry in unity with my heart and the music
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!
    dis was masterfully well pose'd u laid it out
    u and your heart and da musicccccccccccccc!!!
    i'm tune in
     
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    this was nice
     
  4. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u rich and MzBlkAngel
    greatly appreciated
    j.
     
  5. gempis

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    Love your structure and flow! Music is my life, so I can surely relate.
     
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