Black Poetry : Me and Mz. Jones

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Oct 14, 2008.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you see her name is Mz. Jones
    and when I ran across her
    I admit
    I was enthralled
    you see Mz. Jones has a quality
    about her
    that for some reason
    many brothas failed to see
    they're eyes are closed
    or either they're blind
    in any case
    what they don't see
    I see
    and I like what I see
    you see Mz. Jones
    is a dream come true
    for a man
    i'm talking about a real man
    she's not just some late night booty call
    or some one to dog out
    naw...
    she is a true queen
    like those of ages past
    that ruled the egyptian night
    She has a flow and a sway
    that hypnotizes
    and captivates
    a man's mind, body and soul
    her fragrance can be smelled for millions of miles
    and her sultry
    and seductive voice can be heard
    in the warm gentle breeze
    that kisses my lips
    as I walk along the seashore
    yeah Mz. Jones
    I shonuff wish we had a thing going on
    because then I would enjoy proving my worth to you
    no its no hard thing to do
    to give true love
    provide for your needs as a King
    financial, emotional, physical, spiritual
    nothing shall be withheld from you
    but she doesn't even know I'm here
    shining in the night
    my light dimmed
    by the brightness of her aura of beautiful perfection
    I sit and I watch as Mz. Jones continue on
    doing that thing that she do.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not to simplify this piece by any means, but in so many places within, I just said, awww. To see the beauty of who someone truly is, and see their luster shine so brightly, how touching. Do flow on brother.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    story well told

    i've met a couple of Mz. Jones' in my life too

    so again how could i be possibly mad at chu playa
    peace
     
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    i'm really feeling the love in this one
    you've got me wanting to call ms jones right now and ask her for her secret :em2300:
    greaat write poet
     
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    I was reading and singing along too! Excellent work here!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just awesome scribing on the love note !
     
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    Now thats a brotha falling in love right there :)
    when you enjoy proving your worth :read: divine indeed :read: :)
    Who says our Brotha Kings arent romantic :read: :)
    Well done Brotha Bishop as always :)
    Props poet :)
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    Got cha! Welcome to reality poetry, triniti24! Tonight, its Me and Mrs trintr24(please forgive me if this is over the top in creativity, in advance...no harm meant)
     
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