Black Poetry : Me and Mz. Jones

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Dec 12, 2003.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you see her name is Mz. Jones
    and when I ran across her
    I admit
    I was enthralled
    you see Mz. Jones has a quality
    about her
    that for some reason
    many brothas failed to see
    they're eyes are closed
    or either they're blind
    in any case
    what they don't see
    I see
    and I like what I see
    you see Mz. Jones
    is a dream come true
    for a man
    i'm talking about a real man
    she's not just some late night booty call
    or some one to dog out
    naw...
    she is a true queen
    like those of ages past
    that ruled the egyptian night
    She has a flow and a sway
    that hypnotizes
    and captivates
    a man's mind, body and soul
    her fragrance can be smelled for millions of miles
    and her sultry
    and seductive voice can be heard
    in the warm gentle breeze
    that kisses my lips
    as I walk along the seashore
    yeah Mz. Jones
    I shonuff wish we had a thing going on
    because then I would enjoy proving my worth to you
    no its no hard thing to do
    to give true love
    provide for your needs as a King
    financial, emotional, physical, spiritual
    nothing shall be withheld from you
    but she doesn't even know I'm here
    shining in the night
    my light dimmed
    by the brightness of her aura of beautiful perfection
    I sit and I watch as Mz. Jones continue on
    doing that thing that she do.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you betta go get Mz. Jones
    and stop actin shy...for she fly away
    in da handz of another...lol

    nice read...Angel
     
  3. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im feeling this one it made me smile...
    GOD BLESS :toast:
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, if only ms. jones knew what was passing her by....
     
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    loving the mist
    coming from this
    Peace
     
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    I hear you Bishop. Mz Jones does have it going on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin it lovin it Da Bishop pen drips again
     
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    "weve got a thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing goin ooooooooooonnnnnn"
    LoL
    ok see thas what da Bishop pen does to me LoL
    got me hummin bars and stuff :lol:
    lovely to see the shine of loves lighthouse here
     
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    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You getter get her. I hope she realizes that she has you in her midst. nice flow
     
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    Stop doing the one step forward two steps back shuffle, and go for what cha know. Oh and btw, nice write.....
     
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