Black Poetry : Me and my red shoes….

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 19, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me and my red shoes….
    We goin dancin tonight…..
    See I be
    meetin my baby tonight…
    As we take flight…..
    Dancin in da light….
    Of da night moon…
    Starz twinkle…..as we
    Roll wit our flow…
    We two steppin tonight
    Dancin da nite away
    In his arms as we
    swirl and dip
    Doin our thang
    movin my hips …
    doin dat walk…..
    as he do dat talk
    he takes my hand….
    As we two step….
    Me
    my baby
    and my red shoes…..
    Watch out now…
    As he rolls me
    in and out….
    Hypnotize me as
    he begins to do his thang…
    As we two step
    across da room….he….
    Pulls me close …
    Wit a smile on his face…
    We goin at our pace…..
    Into da night……
    Dippin to da tune….
    …as we float…..
    dancin under da moon light….
    Me
    my baby……
    and my red shoes….
    groovin all nite long..
    Wit da perfect moves….
    As we two step
    Dippin
    Tippin
    doin our thang…….
    As we two step…..
    Mixin as we
    Hittin
    curves in dis
    Lovin
    bliss of a
    Twist…..
    Me……….. and
    my baby…under da cherry moon
    …I lost da red shoes……dang……
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost those ruby reds, huh? Dance on anyway, feeling the beat in this one.
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U've already danced
    now it's time 2 romance.
    And U don't need shoes 4 that.

    Nice piece.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dancin
    prancin
    red shoes
    flip ya feet
    dance
    to da beat
    of the tune
    in my room
    as we flow
    rock to da flo
    dance in da
    red shoes
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname..lost dem shoes but its cool :grin:

    PositiveMindset..man i had on my shoes as we danced and pranced in romance...ya feel me.... :blush:

    $$RICH$$.. Da flow got good
    …lost dem thangs..
    on da way to da flo..
    As we began to float.... :blush:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz Khasm..much love ta ya....Angel
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " Wit da perfect moves…. "
    Dancing with you and those red shoe's.

    I'm ready to come out on the floor. I could dance to this one.