Quiet Poetry Lounge : Me and My Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ExquisiteBalla, Jan 20, 2003.

  1. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    Here's a poem i wrote with my love.....

    When I think of
    me and my love
    my love and me
    how we love each other
    so tenderly
    creating situations
    that feel so meant to be
    i can't explain the glee
    that manifests in me
    it's just a love
    that come's from my love's company.

    I just love him so
    today as well as tomorrow.
    My friends ask me "why,"
    "Why would you fall again,
    when you know how it
    ended the last time?"
    I just say on a sigh, "I'm
    not afraid of falling this time,
    he gives me wings I can fly!"

    When I call her my love
    that's exactly what i mean
    together we're a team
    taking a lover's dream
    and putting it into fruition
    for more than the time being.
    She's my mental delight
    i'll gobble up her character
    just can't have one bite.
    I'll love her all day
    and love her all night
    and when climax takes plight
    that just starts the insight
    of what we do on a daily basis
    night after night.
    She's my love and
    will always shine bright
    even in the darkest of nights.

    My best friend, my love
    my feelings for you are as
    expansive as the skys above.
    Though they may try,
    there's nothing anbody can
    do to change these feelings
    I feel for you.
    After all the hurt,
    and after all the pain,
    thank you my love
    for finally bringing my heart
    in out of the rain.

    I love you
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply adorable. 1poetsought
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love dis vibe here fo sho.....keep em' coming
     
  4. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was too sweet. i like!!!!
     
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