Quiet Poetry Lounge : Me and My Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ExquisitesOne, Jan 20, 2003.

  1. ExquisitesOne

    ExquisitesOne New Member MEMBER

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    Here's a poem i wrote with my love.....

    When I think of
    me and my love
    my love and me
    how we love each other
    so tenderly
    creating situations
    that feel so meant to be
    i can't explain the glee
    that manifests in me
    it's just a love
    that come's from my love's company.

    I just love him so
    today as well as tomorrow.
    My friends ask me "why,"
    "Why would you fall again,
    when you know how it
    ended the last time?"
    I just say on a sigh, "I'm
    not afraid of falling this time,
    he gives me wings I can fly!"

    When I call her my love
    that's exactly what i mean
    together we're a team
    taking a lover's dream
    and putting it into fruition
    for more than the time being.
    She's my mental delight
    i'll gobble up her character
    just can't have one bite.
    I'll love her all day
    and love her all night
    and when climax takes plight
    that just starts the insight
    of what we do on a daily basis
    night after night.
    She's my love and
    will always shine bright
    even in the darkest of nights.

    My best friend, my love
    my feelings for you are as
    expansive as the skys above.
    Though they may try,
    there's nothing anbody can
    do to change these feelings
    I feel for you.
    After all the hurt,
    and after all the pain,
    thank you my love
    for finally bringing my heart
    in out of the rain.

    I love you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful display of love for one's mate
    keep within da heart da love so true
     
  3. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful ... when love is that good, the poetry is like ballons an rainy, saturday afternoons ... collaborative work is usually very satisfying.
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once I had a love that deep. that he would alway's put me to sleep, I have'nt had that love in a while but when I do I'll been down in d'neil. Y ou have a good thing and remember people get mad when they see you happy
     
  5. Malicious

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    What a beautiful expression of luv.
    Kinda made me feel warm & fuzzy all over:D
    I think it's great to be so in love, ((big sigh)) I remember when.....seems like a far away notion now.
    Once again beautiful thanks for the read

    ~Malicious~
     
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    wonderful!
    and sweet.

    p.a.,
    b.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the way love should drip
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh this so sweet. you got me vote. flow on poet:hearts4:
     
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    Yes, this is the way love should be, this was intensely endearing.
     
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    Your best friend and your love
    That is beautiful Poet
    Nice drop
     
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