Black Poetry : Me and my alter egos

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Froggy1, Oct 22, 2005.

  1. Froggy1

    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lets have a talk with my alter egos and see how they feel
    since they cant be hear ill let them spit something ethereal
    for the people
    first up is the froggy, the young one
    whose lean
    and is a living jellybean
    funnny never hectic
    freakishly athletic
    I gotta say
    hat being a frog is is the way
    I know so many things
    got dreams of diamond rings
    and mansions
    where ill have ppl dancin
    next up is the slimjim
    skinny warrior who also gets above the rim
    takes in reality
    with a very twisted mentality
    and will obliterate
    any mcs fate
    and make them shake from their spleen
    and dissapear like cee lo green
    my alter egos have spoken
    about their descriptions and are hopin
    that youd get to know them better
    this isnt from tme this is their letter
    tell me which alter ego you like better
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    they all tyte lean and mean
    each pose a core to be seen
    from rim rocker to jam stopper
    even the jumping jellybean......

    drop da thing will ya this was a hot shot))) alter ego
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't really choose one that I like better, cause I don't think one would fully be, without the other. Loving the concept and the way you laid this poet.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Froggy
    This poem just made me smile
    I am just loving the humor
    and the serious tone display in your drop
    It's so cool the mixture of egos flowing
    in your lines...
    Wonderful poet..Loooking forward to reading you more :)

    Peace
     
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    go head on frog...
    flex da alter ego style...

    one love
    khasm
     
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