Black Poetry : maybe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Mar 26, 2002.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love you
    You hate me

    You love me
    I hate you

    Us both really loving eachother

    I tell my friends it's over
    you do the same
    we make love the same night
    we walk in loves pain

    I say I need you
    you stray away
    you come back running
    I say too late
    we still love eachother but this time from afar

    I say I miss you
    you say you miss me too
    we plan to hold eachother
    but it never goes through

    You were once in my life and I loved you so
    time has passed and my love is froze

    maybe
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sounds so familiar to me!!!!
    Deeply felt! :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DA MAYBE'S TURNS TO REALITY YET DA MIND WONDER WHAT IF
    TYGHT SCRIBE MR.M
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't sweat the overage bruh, look to the beginning of a new 'ting. KNow what 'um saying?
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice!!

    I feel ya on dis here!!
    Tyte flow!!
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mr marion...yes, i too, can relate. i'm lovin' the flow of this melancholy piece, dear poet.
     
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