Black Poetry : maybe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by raheem, Apr 23, 2001.

  1. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've said too much
    about me
    and that which you
    now see
    causes a different
    kind of
    tremor

    maybe i came too
    strong
    but was it
    wrong
    to tell you
    second by
    second my
    thoughts
    of
    you?

    maybe you will
    tire of
    my old ways
    and long for
    days
    beyond our
    sharing

    that's been
    my life

    maybe
    you will
    be the one,
    not
    me

    to un-do
    'we'

    maybe

    raheem
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    thank you for this flow
    thank you for joining our family
    please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RAHEEM....

    maybe... indeed.

    i felt each&every word of this piece/peace.

    thank you for sharing.

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raheem ... right ??? ' right .'

    this was personal,
    it spoke to me.
    welcome yo.
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poet.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U SPEAK IN VOWS OF LOVETH THAT MIGHT END
    YET STILL THERE ....I FEEL YA WORDS FLOW

    WELCOME IN THE HOUSE OF LOVE//PEACE & RESPECT
    POET YA SKILLZ IS ON KEY!
     
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