Black Poetry : Maybe We're too Sweet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Aug 26, 2007.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard :

    How can I get her to glisten?

    rev' run :

    Just listen to her heartbeat

    See how neat it sounds

    howard :

    That’s just it, she doesn’t want my Almond Joys or my Mounds to complete her nouns

    rev' run :

    but you still adore her Fudge Rounds

    howard :

    i can't help it, she pulled me from my abyss

    rev' run :

    no wonder you want her kiss

    so what happened, did she judge amiss?

    howard :

    i think i asked for too much

    when her soulmate deserved her touch

    i can't operate her clutch

    without relying on her crutch

    rev' run :

    but you guys can't play Double Dutch again

    howard :

    what if we could still be friends?

    rev' run :

    will she grin if you give her your Mercedes Benz

    howard :

    if that's what it takes to re-adjust her lens

    i'll try it



    love,

    howard
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    worth da try so do it........
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If that doesn't work, you'll find something that does Howard. Time will tell.
     
  4. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey howard,

    I always enjoy reading you..if she doesn't the want the car...I'll take it! J/K


    April
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard:
    That was too lovely.:)
    How have you been?


    Much Luv
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey, u're not too sweet.
    She just don't the good thing in front of her.
    I likes a lot.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    will do $$Rich$$ :shades:

    thanks watzinaname :wave:

    thanks april :blowkiss:

    i'm doing pretty good 4everluv :)
    how have you been doing? good i hope :10900:
     
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