Black Poetry : maybe we could see a movie*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Sep 8, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    hey you

    i've been looking at you from all angles--
    and i have this feeling from the depth of me
    it feels like
    you are everything needed in life
    feels like
    chills
    goosebumps and butterflies
    brushing up against the walls of my stomach--

    i've been looking deep into you--
    and if what i feel is correct--
    you feel
    can feel
    will feel
    exactly the way i have felt since the first time--
    i felt your presence

    :nuts:
    let alone.........................saw your face.

    maybe you are my soul mate--
    maybe you are the messenger of my next life's lesson--
    help teach me--

    maybe we could go see a movie*

    or watch the summer triangle form in the midst of the night sky--

    or maybe i could just watch you.

    (lemme know)


    sean.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    1,264
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    artist
    Location:
    where the sugar is in the land
    Ratings:
    +9
    dear poet, allow me, to be the first to say how enjoyable this piece iz. it iz truly that! i'm lovin' it, sean. and yes i would love to take in a movie wit ya...smiles ta ya, dear poet. very nicely written, yes, indeed.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    MAN WELL SAID HERE POET!

    SHE CAN'T SAY NO TO A LATE NITE SHOW
    SO U FLOW YA PEN OUT AND DO WHAT U DO!
    THANKZ 4 THIS SHARED PIECE.........:toast:
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2001
    Messages:
    2,502
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    -----------
    Location:
    ------------
    Ratings:
    +1
    I've been

    waiting and anticipating
    when you would make
    your move

    my stomach has been
    tied in knots since we
    were first introduced
    goosebumps dominate
    my skin at the mere mention
    of your name

    I've been walking barefoot
    in your mental and if what
    I feel
    I know you feel
    and if WE feel then it must be real

    Could I be your soulmate
    do I have a message of
    your next life lesson....

    How about we skip the movie
    lay out under the stars looking
    deeply into one another and just
    be
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 3, 2001
    Messages:
    3,431
    Likes Received:
    67
    Location:
    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
    Ratings:
    +70
    as they sit under the cherry moon.....

    nice poetsean.
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 15, 2001
    Messages:
    1,868
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    Sales Management
    Location:
    Dallas
    Ratings:
    +14
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    Lister. thank ya love for acceptin' my invitation (blushin')!!! glad to see tha you enjoyed this piece.

    sean.

    aka

    *Hunted
     
  8. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    RICH

    i'm just glad to be one of your 'wright' (pun intended) brothers in flyght!!!


    thanks for blessin' this

    sean

    aka

    WuRdPlAi
     
  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    Zorbi!!!

    don't tease me like DAT!!!

    (grinnin' ear ta ear!!!)


    thanks for the read love.


    sean.

    aka

    [email protected]
     
  10. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    j'hiah

    couldn't thank you e-nuff for i-blessin' this.

    *felt*

    sean.

    aka

    vocabuliss
     
Loading...