Black Poetry : Maybe . . .Perhaps . . . You Did . . .

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  1. adefinitediva

    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could have sworn you said you loved me
    But I know that can't be true
    Because actions speak louder than words---you know
    And there ain't no love in what you do.

    Maybe it was a dream I had
    Or better yet, a lustful fantasy
    But I could have sworn I heard you say
    "I love you, and together we will be."

    Perhaps I misunderstood you
    Or read too deep into what you said
    But if my memory serves me correctly
    You said, "I LOVE YOU" as you gently stroked
    my head.

    I'll admit I have a wild imagination
    And sometimes it seems unreal
    But I'm 99.9% sure you said it
    "I LOVE YOU, KD, and forever will!" :rolleyes:
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diva.


    gurl believe me... if you're 99.9% sure you heard
    it... YOU HEARD IT!! :D this was sweet & i really
    liked the flow. thanks for sharing!! oh &...

    Welcome to the Family!! you're in great company!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME POETESS

    :wave: Hope you enjoy your stay!! :wave:

    Definitely can relate to this piece you laid out right here!
    Kick off your shoes & enjoy the reading of scribes put down by the rest of the family members...


    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Thank you for joining us and sharing your flow. Make yourself at home, partaking of all we have to offer here ... many poets, many
    flows ... wanting you to read us as we continue read you.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Diva Diva Diva welcome

    welcome within to da playgrounds of
    Destee's place upon family & friendz
    as u flow and 99.9% sure ya heard it
    coz from above i heard it and sho nuff
    felt da flow u pose welcome sistah!:D
    :spin: :wave: :wave: :wave: :rolling: :wave: :wave: :wave: :star:
     
  6. adefinitediva

    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all of ya'll who "heard" me. I plan to lay down a few more soon. Until then . . . one love.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome!

    Lovely Scribe!

    Reas
     
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