Black Poetry : Maybe If I.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Oct 30, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe if i.....
    found the letters
    to create the words
    to form the sentences
    ...

    I could tell you how I really feel

    Maybe if I....
    Stopped stuttering
    quit muttering
    and started working on
    my heart's fluttering

    ....

    Maybe then I could keep it real

    Because it isn't
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and if u maybe.....
     
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    maybeee....

    im just confused. lol
     
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    sorry guys!! i did that when i coudln't see the server...my fault, ill come back and write a real flow
     
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    AND MAYBE IF
    BY EVERY LINE U SCRIBE
    I READ AND KNOW
    THE LOVE OF YA HEART
    MAYBE IF
    I WAS NOT SO BLIND
    AND SEE THE REALM
    OF YA HEART SPEAKING
    TO THE PAGE OF THE LETTER
    I WOULD KNOW
    AND
    MAYBE I ALREADY FEEL
    THE HANDZ THAT SCRIBE
    SO I READ
    AND LEARN WHAT MAYBE IS .

    TYTE SCRIBE LOVE THIS PIECE :huh:
     
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    maybe if...i like this even if you werent done before...
    it makes ya think...
    maybe if....hmmmm
    maybe that...hmmmm
    just i like this cool....
    its tight...
    but hey just an Angel's view...
     
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    Maybe if
    there were no crude rules
    that governs the life
    in my ghetto hood..
    i could breath easy
    and live freely

    I like it sister Swt
    it do make you think
    this is cool
    Peace
     
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