Black Poetry : Maya and Gibran

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jan 14, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maya and Gibran
    Know whose planet they are on
    Know that space is occupied
    Babies at the end of time-
    Are demanding when they whine
    Got some issues, I'll make mine...

    Don't do that, just stay black!

    Maya and Gibran
    In an ice age- chill together
    Close their eyes to nuclear gusts
    Dust preempts ~ sunny weather
    Spoiled, cry on such occasion
    Yelling "mama" is a favorite...

    Point of fact, God is black!


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very well writen & posed ......nice flow .
     
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    very interesting piece, Poet....I was drawn in by the title....in Thoughts of verses inviting contemplation on two of my favorite Poets.... "Maya Angelou" and "Khalil Gibran". Your flip of script is even more intriguing and fresh. I'll be back for a re-read.

    Thank you

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    $$Rich$$, Alyce, other artists... Love the way you love, peace!

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    nice write
     
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    TWo of my favorites for sure...
    PLease flow on..
     
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    SEEDS

    Maya is my daughter age 2, terrible though she is.

    Gibran, is my prince of a son age 4.

    Both of whom daddy loves very much.

    1poetsought:heart:
     
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