Quiet Poetry Lounge : May I?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Aug 9, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You look lost
    eyes look like they've been
    blinded by false love
    for many many years
    and many hurtful tears
    I'll dry them for you
    and replace them with
    tears of laughter
    unbelievable laughter
    and tears stemming from
    unexpected pleasure
    so I ask you
    can I show you love?
    may I be the one
    to stroke your hair as you sleep
    and reveal your hips
    from the clothe they are beneath
    letting your flesh breathe
    beautiful smooth skin
    that I slide within
    and yet I need to ask you
    can I show you pleasure?
    even if tension arise
    I fight off wandering eyes
    cause I know you are
    divine like no other
    I even told my mother
    you're more than I expected
    when we first exchanges numbers
    GOD made you and it's no wonder
    that I feel obligated
    to show you a lifetime of appreciation
    for that I need no permission
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the way u did this flow here
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love dis....nice lay
     
  4. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$RICH$$ and Angel. I'm glad you liked it. :D Thank you for the comments.
     
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    Oooh Brother Kente! Yes you can! This was indeed divine. So so so sweet. What a Lucky lady. :spinstar:
     
  6. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Jazzy. I'm sure that describes the hold that you have on the hearts of men. Unfortunately, there is no woman behind this poem at the moment. Just keeping it under wraps until she presents herself. :x:
     
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    I like the poem, and when you find her she will indeed be a lucky woman.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with those poets before me, one lucky lady she will be. This was smooth and lovely.
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Carrie and Watz. You guys are the best. :lips: Well, hopefully I won't be old and gray by that time. :shades: Thanks for the kind words and I'm glad you liked the poem.
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: Awww....you are a sweetie Kente. She will be sent to you when the time is right. No worries. Much love.... :flirt: