Black Poetry : May I Write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Dec 13, 2007.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Entering into a world so new
    Something special made just for two
    Slipping into a relax mood
    Just because I am here with you

    From the beam of your light I shine
    Looking into your brown eyes
    Seeing the reflection of my smile
    Feeling of desire fly’s

    From the warmth of your light I live
    Star lit candles radiance near
    Comet side show blazing so clear
    Passion stirred to gentle tears.

    From the beam of your light I grow
    I love how you hold me close
    Awakening senses into a glow
    drifting toward that southern coast

    from the warmth of your light I write
    Gentle breeze with a moon lit night
    Loving how our love grown so tight
    under the stars all through the night
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent piece poet, I see you've returned with the same fire you left with ...:hot: good to read ya.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was Flow.....
    It just flowed.....
    Like the Moment
    Great Piece Blue Water
    :10200:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    May i write

    from the glist of ya shine
    through the uplifting of time
    as we embrace our notes
    from the mills coast to coast

    From the face of your smile
    as we share love by miles
    that has take us in da clouds
    as i write upon da clay tiles

    Inside your shine i glow
    feeling da warmth from your flow
    and the passion ya hand show
    my dear give me mo and mo

    As these desires run
    like da rays of da radiant sun
    and the moons of night
    is the reason i ask to write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a smooth serene flow, with a gentle sensuality. So happy that that Bluewater style is definitely back.
     
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    Beautiful. Your poem flowed so well every word mealted into one another. Very smooth and sensual. Loved it.
     
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    Hi Sister queentswana
    Thank you so much for the love sis. It's been a while since I dropped.
    Just testing the water..lol...Once again Thank you for the love :heart:

    Hi Sister PLATINUMILLITY1
    Thank you sis so much for the love. That is so true. I was taken a moment.
    Some time we have to create our own world so we don't go insane...lol
    Once again thank you for the love.

    Hi Brother $$RICH$$
    Wow! You once again took my breathe away
    I am fully responding to your flow, your touch your dynamic pen
    It has me wooing to write and feel more.
    Thank you so much for the love and more.

    Hi Sister watzinaname
    Thank you sis for the love, I'm taking it slow. Testing the quill
    It does feel good. Thank you dear sister for the love.

    Hi Sister FattnBeautiful
    Thank you so much for the love. I love the feeling and moments of love, Love of life, love of US Just love.

    We live in a world with so many issues. My choice for now is the issue of love.

    Thank you all so much for sharing your love with me

    Peace~N~Love
     
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