Black Poetry : May I Rhyme

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MANASIAC, Aug 26, 2004.

  1. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just wanted to get this hotness of my mind
    Kick a flow that is clear and non-convoluted
    While refreshing and trill at the same time

    Excuse me for being stank let give my introduction
    It's Mr. Manasiac
    The Flawda boy who at a crossroads of life
    Like a woman-deciding if, she needs liposuction

    Do I surgically remove the evil?
    Or leave it because it feels good
    Nothing like sexing another man's wife atop his car hood

    Single women play too many games
    Married women are straightforward
    Girlfriends and Fiancée’s are the same

    May I rhyme?
    I just want to slide you a picturesque view of this life of mine
    The life of a Womanizer who longs for a Wife at the same time

    At age 5 Adu sang to me
    That the Smooth Operator was not thang to be

    Now 20 years later I realize
    I live every verse
    I never imagined that the diamond life would be such a curse

    I roll from coast to coast
    La to Chicago
    Never realizing that matrimony does not come to men like Lothario

    These aint no confessions from da womb
    They just confessions of a life that leads to a tomb

    May I rhyme?
    Let me show you a view of me outside of poetry
    The life a womanizer who cries when he watches A Wedding Story
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dun...you can rhyme
    oneday ish will be clear
    like days with no clouds and sunshine....word
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, this is a side of you we never see. Don't worry, one day you'll meet that one woman who'll make you forget all others... Good rhyme, nice expression. Thanks for sharing!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's said that to everything there is a season. You never know what may come to you in the future. This rhyme felt genuine. Go head, flow some more.
     
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    Manasia...you know I've got nothing but love....nothing but love

    so if I may use my Flawda dialect... :read:


    This poem is tight werk, it was really off the hinges :wink:

    You put it down...you did...smh :coffee:
     
  6. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] Thank yall for the love mayne.
     
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    I never read one of your poems before and I must say, I loved this. I don't know you, but I have always been entertained and intrigued by what you've said in the open forums. In your travels, she will come. Trust.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed brutha go head vent and surely
    da magical opne of womanly love will come
    the myth of maze will be gone and sunshine come
    hold on at da crossroad ....tyte drop u need to flow
    more often man !
     
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    tight rhyme and daps for the honesty
     
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    reality

    Mad props om ya rhyme my brother the confessions of a state of mind are the deeper kind. I have walked this road many times before and I understand the 2 edeged sword of the life.
    Respect given my brother for the realness of your reality!
     
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