Black Poetry : May I? (Haiku)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ebony brutha
    At dim moments of deep thoughts
    May I offer light?


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  2. alyce

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    excellent!

    :heart:

    thank you

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love how u express ya self..

    yes u may....:D
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    that means a lot com'n from someone as creative such as yourself. Thanks :)


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
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  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$

    Just gimme a sign...and I'll be there. :wink: Thanks for the love


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
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  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    profound...in it's three lines of wisdom Miss Coco...

    K
     
  7. themac46

    themac46 Active Member MEMBER

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    The Thought

    Coco - this is so deep even if someone does not understand it will make them think. So it is doing the job.

    Keep it coming.

    :toast:

    :cool:
     
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    Hot Coco Lady Street So'ja

    yes you may
    each and every day
    you bring the light
    to make things okay
    don't play
    i have to say
    you shine like a sun ray

    you think so clearly
    feel you dearly
    merely
    in awe of you okay
    and
    yes you may

    DSSNY
     
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    i love haikus

    and this one says it all

    pd
     
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    so, light a brutha up...

    i be lost
    and confused
    ...been abused
    and misused
    ...need you to brighten my day
    gimme light
    ...throw some love my way

    yes, you may.
     
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