Black Poetry : May I Flow For You With Love?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May I flow for you till my tongue
    gets tied up with each word I say
    as it pertains to love?

    To flow with love is like experiencing
    love inside and out…I therefore, know
    you well

    Let me voice what I feel to be true
    as I cry out in ecstasy as I answer
    the question: How Do I Love Thee?

    I won’t count the ways but express
    them one by one to articulate the
    need I feel to flow with love for you

    Streaming pronunciations meant to
    shout with love from the bottom of my
    heart of how much I desire to spill over

    v~e~r~b~a~l~l~y
    &
    e~m~o~t~i~o~n~a~l~l~y
    &
    m~e~n~t~a~l~l~y
    for sure…

    Can I tell you the little things that
    cause you and I to transform from two
    entities into one enraptured in love?

    Yes…

    I believe I shall
    express from within
    my soul

    So as I downpour with love for you, realize
    it is I with the sensuous tongue that
    takes you to your highest highs where
    our floodgates of love are gushing true…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. SHAKA ZULU

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    SHONOUGH ITS ON THE WAY LOVE FLOWS .KEEP IT FLOWING.SHAKA ZULU.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I feel it in da air .....Q ya bout to heat up da house for winter!!
    sho all dat love bruh!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice....very nice.
     
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    Oh I must say...

    the heat is definately on!!!!!:hot:

    Let it flow G~~ let it flow!!

    Aminata:heart:
     
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    oohh...feelin it
    I like you style GQ

    nice verse...700
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    may i?

    wow... i know that i said this before but your flow is smoothe and your words are real... so real that i can feel it just by reading...
     
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    well well well.... the wisdom of love is defintely found within ur wordz of passion GQ.... this poem touched me deeply...
    guess I'm a hopeless romantic, but love is alwayz my #1 topic.
    I'll be looking to hear more from ya... as always...wonderful flow!!!
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fellow scribes,

    Your words of love are appreciated mos' def...

    Thanks for the eyes on this one!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  10. herlove

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    each syllable every range of infliction of thy choice of words remind me of loves evolution how in time it journeys, transforms, reforms those lacking into that which it should be..... an everlasting love a love of old... of this truth i am sold and stand bold
     
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