Black Poetry : MAY I ENTER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Upon my arms i so hold you
    closer inside my love
    where we brisk in such beauty
    as i slowly grasp your beings
    to behold in time

    let me my dearest enter you
    for where sweet devotion
    will explore the temple of ya soul
    while our spirits dance like doves
    in a romantic moment

    Let me share with you da grace
    and warmth forth i would give
    unconditionally as we become blessed
    if only you could see me to know
    my emotions and taste my love

    As i close another letter to be sealed
    my lips upon it i so kiss in depth of
    your heart for i feel every beat against mines
    I'm ready to take you there
    may I enter beloveth
     
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    i'm not sure who this poem is for, but...
    so many times these words
    have brushed themselves against my heart
    for it is foolish and still believes in love
    and people even if it should not.
    if your words of love are real...
    enter gently and come true
    it doesn't matter who she is
    let the full embrace of your love
    shine through solely for her heart
    so that she may without fear
    shower you with the abundance of
    her lifelong love and dedication.
     
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    A most beautiful thread.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From this chapter of love
    written abundently for thy mystery
    for she will rise upon the slop
    at da harps of love in musical note
    as my heart opens to bring forth her
    she maybe the mystery to my reasons
    and know not of my loyality to her
    but hopefully she grasp thy letter
    within da soul and allow my entering
    for we can shower beauty
    and share happiness in a devotional
    spray only tyme hold our fate.
     
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    loyality i know well
    for i have it for the
    other half of my heart
    whether i am vocal on other matters
    or sitting quietly off stage
    watching him with a smile on my face
    he can rest assured, my heart and soul
    are open to him and he doesn't need
    permission to enter what is his
    for
    i
    love
     
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    It must be beautiful to know
    and compose a heart that awaits him
    for as i , the love of heart & soul
    has place thy hand and ready to enter
    the temple of true love and devotion
    which i bring so that thy smile be bright
    and love blossom
    every kiss blooms a deeper bond
    when i write her again i will call for her
    and may she hear my cry of love.
     
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