Black Poetry : May December

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, May 9, 2002.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We joke about hip hop
    What’s cool, what’s not
    We’re close
    age is irrelevant
    cause sex transcends
    We click when we’re together
    Every time…
    Like a fine wine that’s tasted
    Not a feeling or touch is wasted

    But that possessive thing
    Drives us apart
    The meaning of the message
    Sex is like art…tasteful graceful
    Keep it in perspective
    Love is there but it can’t be arrested
    Development
    Give it up and share
    That’s on you…cause just like hip hop
    It changes too

    You so old
    You so young
    But when we’re together
    We wrap each other’s tongue
    Slip it into my mouth and do that dance
    Stare into my eyes steal a glance at my soul
    Your tenderness
    Mixed together and I will swallow your come
    And letting you go is so hard to do
    Just give me the strength to make it through
    And once again I will see you

    When the time is right
    When the mood is right
    When we can joke about hip hop
    When I can be with you and safely let you go
    Back to where I came from
    My suburban humdrum
    You are my spark of life
    I am your melody…let you be you
    But you set me free
     
  2. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY GAWD !!!!

    I have often heard that older women
    are the way to go.

    Your May/ December romance is very exciting in words --
    I can imagine how the age doesn't factor in it at all.

    This was vivid and very personal -- I enjoyed this very, very
    very much.

    Go on Redlady " WIT CHO BAD SELF "
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the force of this joint .... (still catchin my breath)

    whew!

    thank ya!

    alyce
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know i sometimes get intense, but when I am feeling something, it comes through and onto the paper quite quickly. Thanks.
     
  5. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...that clanging/banging noise is the gong that went off in my head after my knees got weak and I fell and hurt myself thinking about the good pain you've caused in me with this here....

    thas all

    Bert
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes i fall and hurt myself too! thank you.
     
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