Black Poetry : Masterpieces Out of rain..?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 19, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just showed someone A poem...
    wich said...
    maybe youre best piece ever written..

    I esxpressed Myself Emotionaly...

    MasterPieces Out of rain ?

    maybe i expressed...

    but it wont take away the pain...

    Poems will come and go...

    it doesnt matter if its about...

    Pain
    Love
    Life
    Peace
    Joy

    They will clean youre mind and maybe youre heart...
    but Heal ?
    for me ?
    Oh no..

    Than i would rather be the baddest..
    writting Poet but Happy on earth..
    than the Best writting Poet...

    with a lot of hurt....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release i be all into it too
    nice scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Says It All

    Than i would rather be the baddest..
    writting Poet but Happy on earth..
    than the Best writting Poet...

    with a lot of hurt....

    -LibertyLady
     
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    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    as poems come and go,so do men come and go.......
    expression is good,but the way we express is very important......
    thanks for the flow
     
  6. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on this!! much love sis.
    Eternal
     
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